id have to say it had a lot of good points, and some points that could be improved on..
good points, i was interested throughout most of it. i think thats ultimately the goal of most films which means you guys did a good job. an interesting portrayal of each of the characters. The cut were pretty good and flowed consistantly througout the film.
parts to improve on, dialogue was a bit choppy (could be actors, or just the script) certain shots were a bit too akward for my taste (the way i see it, if it bothers the viewer enough to detract from the story, it could pose as a problem, for example the response of the lesbian character was way off to one side durin the conversation at dinner, and it made it feel detached). Last part was the sound seems very low key (most likely my crappy speakers) but nonetheless, i thought the sound could of been recorded better, i heard a lot of echos from the rooms.
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Good job 'vita. :)
that's hot... i hope to see more of your work
id have to say it had a lot of good points, and some points that could be improved on..
good points, i was interested throughout most of it. i think thats ultimately the goal of most films which means you guys did a good job. an interesting portrayal of each of the characters. The cut were pretty good and flowed consistantly througout the film.
parts to improve on, dialogue was a bit choppy (could be actors, or just the script) certain shots were a bit too akward for my taste (the way i see it, if it bothers the viewer enough to detract from the story, it could pose as a problem, for example the response of the lesbian character was way off to one side durin the conversation at dinner, and it made it feel detached). Last part was the sound seems very low key (most likely my crappy speakers) but nonetheless, i thought the sound could of been recorded better, i heard a lot of echos from the rooms.
out of 5 stars, id easily give it a 3.5
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